Addressing burner JID ML feedback

inbox/burner.xml

@@ -8,8 +8,7 @@
 <header>
   <title>Burner JIDs</title>
   <abstract>
-    A mechanism by which users may request arbitrary anonymizing "burner" JIDs
+    A mechanism by which users may request anonymous, ephemeral "burner" JIDs.
-    for short term use.
   </abstract>
   &LEGALNOTICE;
   <number>xxxx</number>
@@ -19,6 +18,7 @@
   <approver>Council</approver>
   <dependencies>
     <spec>XMPP Core</spec>
+    <spec>RFC 4422</spec>
   </dependencies>
   <supersedes/>
   <supersededby/>
@@ -38,16 +38,16 @@
     Traditionally this is accomplished using SASL authentication and the
     ANONYMOUS mechanism as detailed in &xep0175;, however, ANONYMOUS auth
     provides no mechanism for changing identities (requesting a new JID) without
-    creating a new session, and server operators may not wish to allow anonymous
+    creating a new session, nor does it provide authentication of users.
-    authentication to prevent abuse.
   </p>
   <p>
     This specification solves these problems by decoupling anonymous identity
     management from authentication.
-    This allows logged in users (anonymous or otherwise at the server operators
+    This allows logged in users (authenticated or anonymous at the server
-    disgression) to request a new temporary identifier, a "burner" JID, which
+    operators disgression) to request a new temporary identifier, a "burner"
-    may be used by its owner in any context where they would normally use their
+    JID, which may be used by its owner to construct a new session with the
-    persistent primary JID.
+    server that is anonymous to third parties but is (optionally) locally
+    authenticated.
   </p>
 </section1>
 <section1 topic='Glossary' anchor='glossary'>
@@ -56,15 +56,14 @@
       <dt>Burner JID</dt>
       <dd>
         A temporary JID that is not valid for the purpose of authentication but
-        which may be used in place of the authentication identity in a
+        which may be authorized by an existing pre-authenticated session.
-        pre-authenticated session.
       </dd>
     </di>
     <di>
       <dt>Ephemeral identity</dt>
       <dd>
-        The identity of a user on the server comprising a shared secret and any
+        The identity of a user on the server comprising a burner JID and any
-        associated burner JIDs or other stored information about the user.
+        other associated data.
       </dd>
     </di>
     <di>
@@ -118,10 +117,21 @@
     type='result'>
   <identity xmlns='urn:xmpp:burner:0'>
     <jid>
-      hfgnINTSA-ciCLz6NhTtCD5Jr0k:1477672278884j@example.net/4db06f06-1ea4-11dc-aca3-000bcd821bfb
+      hfgnINTSA-ciCLz6NhTtCD5Jr0k:1477672278884j@example.net
     </jid>
   </identity>
 </iq>]]></example>
+  <p>
+    The burner JID MUST be a bare JID.
+    Burner JIDs are not valid for the purpose of authentication, but may be
+    authorized to perform actions.
+    To use the burner JID the client then attempts to establish a new session
+    with the server using the account that requested the burner JID as the
+    authentication identity and the burner JID as the authorization identity as
+    defined in &rfc4422; &sect;2. If the server does not support SASL, or does
+    not support any SASL mechanisms that support authorization identities,
+    burner JIDs cannot be used.
+  </p>
 </section1>
 <section1 topic='Determining Support' anchor='support'>
   <p>
@@ -147,13 +157,18 @@
   <p>
     It may be impractical to store verification information for every burner JID
     issued by the system.
-    To this end it is RECOMMENDED that the localpart of a burner JID be an
+    To this end servers that implement this specification may choose to encode
-    HMAC-SHA-256 which includes the users JID or another unique identifier, an
+    information into the localpart of issued burner JIDs which can be verified
-    expiration or issued time for the burner JID if appropriate, TLS channel
+    when a user attempts to authorize a new session to use the burner JID.
-    binding information, session information, or any other data the server
+    If an implementation chooses to do this it is RECOMMENDED that an
-    wishes to verify.
+    &nistfips198-1; be used.
+    This HMAC MAY include the JID of the associated authentication identity, an
+    expiration or issued time for the burner JID, session information, TLS
+    channel binding data, or any other information the server wishes to verify.
     The format of this key or its input values is left as an implementation
     decision.
+  </p>
+  <p>
     As with persistent JIDs, the client MUST NOT assign any meaning to the
     localpart or resourcepart of a burner JID.
   </p>
@@ -161,12 +176,8 @@
 <section1 topic='Security Considerations' anchor='security'>
   <p>
     To prevent burner JIDs from being abused for spamming, implementations
-    SHOULD rate limit all burner JIDs in use by a given authentication identity
+    SHOULD rate limit all burner JIDs in use by an authentication identity as a
-    as a single unit.
+    single unit.
-  </p>
-  <p>
-    When a users session ends it is RECOMMENDED that any ephemeral identities
-    associated with their session be purged.
   </p>
   <p>
     If TLS channel binding information is encoded in the burner JID it is
@@ -177,6 +188,11 @@
     resumption does not include enough context to successfully verify the
     binding.
   </p>
+  <p>
+    Implementations that choose to encode information in the localpart of burner
+    JIDs should take care when choosing a hash function.
+    For current recommendations see &xep0300;.
+  </p>
 </section1>
 <section1 topic='IANA Considerations' anchor='iana'>
   <p>This docment requires no interaction with the &IANA;.</p>
@@ -197,7 +213,7 @@
   <type>
     <name>ephemeral</name>
     <desc>
-      An authorization service that provides ephemeral "burner" identities.
+      An authorization service that provides ephemeral identities.
     </desc>
     <doc>XEP-XXXX</doc>
   </type>
@@ -226,4 +242,7 @@
 <section1 topic='XML Schema' anchor='schema'>
   <p>TODO.</p>
 </section1>
+<section1 topic='Acknowledgements' anchor='ack'>
+  <p>The author wishes to thank Philipp Hancke for his feedback.</p>
+</section1>
 </xep>