Update title and typo fixes

xep-0357.xml

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 <?xml-stylesheet type='text/xsl' href='xep.xsl'?>
 <xep>
     <header>
-        <title>Push</title>
+        <title>Push Notifications</title>
         <abstract>This specification defines a way for an XMPP servers to deliver information for use in push notifications to mobile and other devices.</abstract>
         &LEGALNOTICE;
         <number>0357</number>
@@ -29,6 +29,12 @@
             <email>lancestout@gmail.com</email>
             <jid>lance@lance.im</jid>
         </author>
+        <revision>
+            <version>0.2</version>
+            <date>2015-09-10</date>
+            <initials>lance</initials>
+            <remark><p>Change the name to 'Push Notifications' based on feedback.</p></remark>
+        </revision>
         <revision>
             <version>0.1</version>
             <date>2015-03-18</date>
@@ -52,7 +58,7 @@
         <p>The purpose of push notifications is to inform users of new messages or other pertinent information even when they have no XMPP clients online.</p>
         <p>Typically, these notifications are delivered to a user's mobile device, displaying a notice that can trigger opening an XMPP client to continue a conversation or answer a Jingle session request.</p>
 
-        <p>There have been several push noticiations implementations by mobile XMPP client vendors. However, experience has shown that these implementations carried several drawbacks:</p>
+        <p>There have been several push notification implementations by mobile XMPP client vendors. However, experience has shown that these implementations carried several drawbacks:</p>
         <ul>
             <li>Treated the XMPP client and XMPP server as one unified service, such that push notifications only worked using the "official" client.</li>
             <li>Proxied a user's session through the client provider's backend services in order to monitor for and trigger push notifications.</li>
@@ -76,7 +82,7 @@
             <li>The third-party (and potentially proprietary or platform-dependent) push service delivers the notification from the client application's backend service to the user's device.</li>
         </ol>
 
-        <p>This two-tiered push architecture allows the user's XMPP server to deliver notifications to arbitrary third-pary clients, and in turn allows those clients to use the appropriate delivery mechanism for their platforms without having to share any private keys or other credentials with the XMPP server.</p>
+        <p>This two-tiered push architecture allows the user's XMPP server to deliver notifications to arbitrary third-party clients, and in turn allows those clients to use the appropriate delivery mechanism for their platforms without having to share any private keys or other credentials with the XMPP server.</p>
 
         <section2 topic='General Architecture of a Push Notification Service' anchor='general-architecture'>
             <p>The current state-of-the-art for a generic push notification service requires four actors:</p>
@@ -335,7 +341,7 @@
 
         <p>If additional data was provided when enabling the service, the publish request SHOULD include the data as publish options.</p>
 
-        <example caption='Server publishes a push notifictation with provided publish options'><![CDATA[
+        <example caption='Server publishes a push notification with provided publish options'><![CDATA[
 <iq type='set'
     from='user@example.com'
     to='push-5.client.example'

xep.ent

@@ -1339,7 +1339,7 @@ IANA Service Location Protocol, Version 2 (SLPv2) Templates</link></span> <note>
 <!ENTITY xep0354 "<span class='ref'><link url='http://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0354.html'>Customizable Message Routing (XEP-0354)</link></span> <note>XEP-0354: Customizable Message Routing &lt;<link url='http://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0354.html'>http://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0354.html</link>&gt;.</note>" >
 <!ENTITY xep0355 "<span class='ref'><link url='http://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0355.html'>Namespace Delegation (XEP-0355)</link></span> <note>XEP-0355: Namespace Delegation &lt;<link url='http://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0355.html'>http://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0355.html</link>&gt;.</note>" >
 <!ENTITY xep0356 "<span class='ref'><link url='http://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0356.html'>Privileged Entity (XEP-0356)</link></span> <note>XEP-0356: Privileged Entity &lt;<link url='http://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0356.html'>http://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0356.html</link>&gt;.</note>" >
-<!ENTITY xep0357 "<span class='ref'><link url='http://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0357.html'>Push (XEP-0357)</link></span> <note>XEP-0357: Push &lt;<link url='http://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0357.html'>http://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0357.html</link>&gt;.</note>" >
+<!ENTITY xep0357 "<span class='ref'><link url='http://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0357.html'>Push Notifications (XEP-0357)</link></span> <note>XEP-0357: Push Notifications &lt;<link url='http://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0357.html'>http://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0357.html</link>&gt;.</note>" >
 <!ENTITY xep0358 "<span class='ref'><link url='http://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0358.html'>Publishing Available Jingle Sessions (XEP-0358)</link></span> <note>XEP-0358: Publishing Available Jingle Sessions &lt;<link url='http://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0358.html'>http://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0358.html</link>&gt;.</note>" >
 <!ENTITY xep0359 "<span class='ref'><link url='http://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0359.html'>Unique and Stable Stanza IDs (XEP-0359)</link></span> <note>XEP-0359: Unique and Stable Stanza IDs &lt;<link url='http://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0359.html'>http://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0359.html</link>&gt;.</note>" >
 <!ENTITY xep0360 "<span class='ref'><link url='http://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0360.html'>Nonzas (are not Stanzas) (XEP-0360)</link></span> <note>XEP-0360: Nonzas (are not Stanzas) &lt;<link url='http://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0360.html'>http://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0360.html</link>&gt;.</note>" >