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@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
   <p>First, the party that wishes to initiate the stream determines the responder's capabilities (via &xep0030; or &xep0115;). Here we assume that the responder supports a service discovery feature of 'urn:xmpp:tmp:jingle:apps:xmlstream' &NSNOTE; corresponding to the Jingle XML stream functionalited defined herein, as well as the 'urn:xmpp:tmp:jingle:transports:bytestreams' and 'urn:xmpp:tmp:jingle:transports:ibb' features currently defined in &xep0234;.</p>
   <p>The initiator then sends a Jingle session-initiation request to the responder. The content-type of the request specifies two things:</p>
   <ol start='1'>
-    <li><p>An application type of "urn:xmpp:tmp:jingle:apps:xmlstream" &NSNOTE;, where the &lt;description/&gt; element specifies parameters for the XML stream, where the parameters map to those provided in &xep0155; in a way that is consistent with &xep0116;.</p></li>
+    <li><p>An application type of "urn:xmpp:tmp:jingle:apps:xmlstream" &NSNOTE;, where the &lt;description/&gt; element specifies parameters for the XML stream and the parameters map to those provided in &xep0155; in a way that is consistent with &xep0116;.</p></li>
     <li><p>Options for the reliable transport method, such as In-Band Bytestreams ("IBB") as defined in <cite>XEP-0047</cite> or SOCKS5 Bytestreams ("S5B") as defined in <cite>XEP-0065</cite>.</p></li>
   </ol>
   <p>In this example, the initiator is &lt;alice@example.org&gt;, the responder is &lt;bob@example.com&gt;, and the initiation request specifies Alice's desired stream parameters along with a transport method of "bytestreams" (i.e., <cite>XEP-0065</cite>).</p>