From bcdfeca80ff50d1c6bfd996723bced03c69c2f3d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ralph Meijer <ralphm@ik.nu>
Date: Thu, 17 Jan 2019 17:11:10 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Make it explicit where to issue the request for advancement

---
 xep-0001.xml | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/xep-0001.xml b/xep-0001.xml
index 5492cb4f..0fba3e3c 100644
--- a/xep-0001.xml
+++ b/xep-0001.xml
@@ -279,7 +279,7 @@
   </ul>
   <p>Within 14 days, the Chair of the Approving Body shall poll members of the Approving Body. In rare cases, the Approving Body may decide that the wrong Approving Body may have been chosen. If the Approving Body is in doubt, the XSF Board shall determine the correct Approving Body.</p>
   <p>If no member of the Approving Body objects to publication of the proposal, the XMPP Extensions Editor shall accept it as a XEP. The precise rules for polls, including meetings and timeouts, are determined by the Chair of the Approving Body.</p>
-  <p>If objections are raised by the Approving Body on the Standards list or in its meeting, the XEP author is encouraged to address the feedback of the Council and to submit a revised version of the proposal and/or confer with the XMPP Extensions Editor or objecting Approving Body member(s) regarding how to proceed.</p>
+  <p>If objections are raised by the Approving Body on the discussion list of the &SSIG; (the Standards list) or in its meeting, the XEP author is encouraged to address the feedback of the Approving Body and to submit a revised version of the proposal and/or confer with the XMPP Extensions Editor or objecting Approving Body member(s) regarding how to proceed.</p>
   <p>If the proposal is accepted as a XEP, the XMPP Extensions Editor shall do the following:</p>
   <ul>
     <li>assign it a number</li>
@@ -297,7 +297,7 @@
   <p>If an Experimental XEP is inactive (i.e., no updated versions are published) for a period of twelve (12) months, the XMPP Extensions Editor shall automatically change the status of the XEP to Deferred unless it is in the queue of XEPs under active consideration for advancement by the Approving Body; upon submission of an updated version, the XMPP Extensions Editor shall change the status back to Experimental.</p>
 </section1>
 <section1 topic='Proposal Process' anchor='proposal'>
-  <p>An Experimental (or Deferred) XEP may be proposed to the Approving Body for advancement to Draft (Standards Track XEPs) or Active (Historical, Informational, and Procedural XEPs). This can be requested from the Approving Body by, or in collaboration with, the XEP author. In case the XEP has been abandoned by its author(s), any other person can propose advancement in their stead, thereby taking up the role of XEP author. The Approving Body must agree that the XEP is ready to be considered for advancement. Once the Approving Body so agrees, it shall instruct the XMPP Extensions Editor to (1) change the status of the XEP from Experimental (or Deferred) to Proposed and (2) issue a Last Call for open discussion on the Standards list. The Last Call shall expire not less than fourteen (14) days after the date of issue.</p>
+  <p>An Experimental (or Deferred) XEP may be proposed to the Approving Body for advancement to Draft (Standards Track XEPs) or Active (Historical, Informational, and Procedural XEPs). This can be requested from the Approving Body on the Standards list by, or in collaboration with, the XEP author. In case the XEP has been abandoned by its author(s), any other individual can propose advancement in their stead, thereby taking up the role of XEP author. The Approving Body must agree that the XEP is ready to be considered for advancement. Once the Approving Body so agrees, it shall instruct the XMPP Extensions Editor to (1) change the status of the XEP from Experimental (or Deferred) to Proposed and (2) issue a Last Call for open discussion on the Standards list. The Last Call shall expire not less than fourteen (14) days after the date of issue.</p>
   <p>Once the consensus of the Standards SIG has been incorporated into the XEP and all issues of substance raised during the Last Call have been addressed by the XEP author, the XMPP Extensions Editor shall formally propose a specific revision of the XEP to the Approving Body for its vote. If necessary, the XMPP Extensions Editor may, at his discretion and in consultation with the Approving Body, extend the Last Call or issue a new Last Call if the XEP requires further discussion.</p>
 </section1>
 <section1 topic='Approval Process' anchor='approval'>