XEP-0366: Fix typos

Remove author info for Doug who no longer works at Atlassian.
Change author info for Sam to use the entity.
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Sam Whited 2016-07-11 21:09:53 -05:00
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<supersedes />
<supersededby />
<shortname>EV</shortname>
<author>
<firstname>Sam</firstname>
<surname>Whited</surname>
<email>swhited@atlassian.com</email>
<jid>sam@samwhited.com</jid>
</author>
&sam;
<author>
<firstname>Doug</firstname>
<surname>Keen</surname>
<email>dkeen@atlassian.com</email>
</author>
<revision>
<version>0.1.1</version>
<date>2016-07-11</date>
<initials>ssw</initials>
<remark><p>Typo fixes.</p></remark>
</revision>
<revision>
<version>0.1</version>
<date>2015-12-15</date>
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multiple versions of an entity list or maintain other redundant state.
</li>
<li>
Inconsistant state between servers in a cluster should not cause cache
Inconsistent state between servers in a cluster should not cause cache
invalidation for the entire entity list.
</li>
<li>
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<dt>Aggregate Token</dt>
<dd>
A hash which represents the state of a list of entities, and changes if
any of those entities changes.
any of the entities change.
</dd>
<dt>Versioned Entity</dt>
<dd>Any abstract object which may be versioned (eg. rooms, users).</dd>
<dd>Any object which may be versioned (eg. rooms, users).</dd>
<dt>Version Token</dt>
<dd>
A short, case sensitive string which represents an entity and changes if
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this document. Similarly, clients MAY also add version nodes for each
version token they possess to the request for a list (not specifying a
version token will force the server to send information on that entity to
the client). If a server sends up a list of version tokens, the server
the client). If a client sends up a list of version tokens, the server
MUST then check to see if those tokens correspond to any entity which it
knows about, and not send down any entities with matching version tokens
in the response.