From b86798a3286fecdcadba6a15875a812252de761c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Peter Saint-Andre <stpeter@jabber.org>
Date: Tue, 12 Jun 2007 18:45:47 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] 1.0 DRAFT

git-svn-id: file:///home/ksmith/gitmigration/svn/xmpp/trunk@942 4b5297f7-1745-476d-ba37-a9c6900126ab
---
 xep-0156.xml | 33 ++++++++++++++++++++-------------
 1 file changed, 20 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

diff --git a/xep-0156.xml b/xep-0156.xml
index acab0677..7463219e 100644
--- a/xep-0156.xml
+++ b/xep-0156.xml
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
   <abstract>This document defines a DNS TXT Resource Record format for use in discovering alternative methods of connecting to an XMPP server.</abstract>
   &LEGALNOTICE;
   <number>0156</number>
-  <status>Proposed</status>
+  <status>Draft</status>
   <type>Standards Track</type>
   <sig>Standards</sig>
   <approver>Council</approver>
@@ -20,9 +20,16 @@
   </dependencies>
   <supersedes/>
   <supersededby/>
-  <shortname>N/A</shortname>
+  <shortname>alt-connections</shortname>
+  <registry/>
   &hildjj;
   &stpeter;
+  <revision>
+    <version>1.0</version>
+    <date>2007-06-12</date>
+    <initials>psa</initials>
+    <remark><p>Per a vote of the XMPP Council, advanced status to Draft; XMPP Registrar assigned alt-connections shortname and created appropriate registry.</p></remark>
+  </revision>
   <revision>
     <version>0.7</version>
     <date>2007-04-18</date>
@@ -119,7 +126,7 @@
   </ol>
 </section1>
 <section1 topic='Examples' anchor='examples'>
-  <p>The following examples show two DNS TXT resource records: the first indicates support for the httpbind connection method defined in XEP-0124 and the second indicates support for WAP connections (both include appropriate URLs).</p>
+  <p>The following examples show two DNS TXT resource records: the first indicates support for the XMPP Over BOSH connection method defined in <cite>XEP-0124</cite> and <cite>XEP-0206</cite> and the second indicates support for WAP connections (the latter connection method is not yet defined).</p>
   <example caption='TXT Resource Records'><![CDATA[
 _xmppconnect IN TXT "_xmpp-client-xbosh=https://web.jabber.org:8080/bind.cgi"
 _xmppconnect IN TXT "_xmpp-client-wap=http://wap.jabber.org/connector.cgi"
@@ -133,14 +140,14 @@ _xmppconnect IN TXT "_xmpp-client-wap=http://wap.jabber.org/connector.cgi"
 </section1>
 <section1 topic='XMPP Registrar Considerations' anchor='registrar'>
   <section2 topic='Alternative Connection Methods Registry' anchor='registrar-altconn'>
-    <p>The XMPP Registrar shall maintain a registry of attributes for use in DNS TXT resource records that advertise alternative connection methods.</p>
+    <p>The &REGISTRAR; maintains a registry of attributes for use in DNS TXT resource records that advertise alternative XMPP connection methods (see &ALTCONN;).</p>
     <section3 topic='Process' anchor='registrar-altconn-process'>
       &REGPROCESS;
       <code><![CDATA[
 <method>
   <name>the name of the attribute to be used in DNS TXT records</name>
   <desc>a natural-language description of the alternative connection method</desc>
-  <value>the syntax of the DNS TXT record attribute value</value>
+  <syntax>the syntax of the DNS TXT record attribute value</syntax>
   <doc>the document in which the alternative connection method is specified</doc>
 </method>
       ]]></code>
@@ -150,19 +157,19 @@ _xmppconnect IN TXT "_xmpp-client-wap=http://wap.jabber.org/connector.cgi"
       <code><![CDATA[
 <method>
   <name>_xmpp-client-httppoll</name>
-  <desc>the HTTP Polling connection method</desc>
-  <value>
-    the http: or https: URL at which to contact the HTTP Polling connection manager or proxy
-  </value>
+  <desc>HTTP Polling connection method</desc>
+  <syntax>
+    The http: or https: URL at which to contact the HTTP Polling connection manager or proxy
+  </syntax>
   <doc>XEP-0025</doc>
 </method>
 
 <method>
   <name>_xmpp-client-xbosh</name>
-  <desc>the XMPP Over Bosh connection method</desc>
-  <value>
-    the http: or https: URL at which to contact the HTTP Binding connection manager or proxy
-  </value>
+  <desc>XMPP Over Bosh connection method</desc>
+  <syntax>
+    The http: or https: URL at which to contact the HTTP Binding connection manager or proxy
+  </syntax>
   <doc>XEP-0206</doc>
 </method>
       ]]></code>