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Remove corporate membership
Although at the time this document was written, the XSF has only ever had - "natural persons" - that is, ordinary people - apply - for membership, the &BYLAWS; explicitly allow for corporate membership. In order to ensure - the form of an application can satisfy this, this document will assume such applications may - occur in the future.
-This document will distinguish requirements by using the term "Applicant" to mean either - type, "Natural Applicant" for actual people, and "Corporate Applicant" for legal entities - other than natural persons.
+This section is not normative; for the strict answer to this question the reader is requested to read the &BYLAWS;.
+At the time of writing, only "natural persons" - that is, ordinary people as opposed to corporations and similar entities regarded as persons in some cases - may apply to join the XMPP Standards Foundation as members. People applying for membership are, in this document, called by the term "Applicants".
Applications are to be submitted as a new Wiki Page on the XSF Wiki, @@ -67,34 +67,19 @@ the Applicant concerned.
In the case that a particular application is questionable for some reason - if it is thought to be missing mandatory information or failing to disclose affiliations - a member may raise a Challenge with the membership, by sending a message to the members list detailing the issues. A member request a member of the &BOARD; to raise the Challenge anonymously on their behalf; the member of the Board however is in no way compelled to do so.
+In the case that a particular application is questionable for some reason - if it is thought to be missing mandatory information or failing to disclose affiliations - a member may raise a Challenge with the membership, by sending a message to the members list detailing the issues. A member may request a member of the &BOARD; to raise the Challenge anonymously on their behalf; the member of the Board however is in no way compelled to do so.
The XSF Board is the final arbiter of such Challenges, and shall make a final decision on whether the application should be rejected; however the Board is expected to take into account any rough consensus of the members. Any rejection will include any remedies possible.
Notwithstanding the final nature of the XSF Board's decision, any application so rejected may be resubmitted by the Applicant, presumably after addressing the issues.
The purpose of the mandatory information is to allow the XSF Secretary sufficient information to adhere to the XSF Bylaws. As a secondary purpose, it also allows the XSF members to make an informed decision when voting to accept applications; it is important for Applicants to understand that this mandatory information is unlikely to be sufficient to convince the members, however.
-Applicants must provide:
Corporate Applicants must provide:
-Natural Applicants must provide:
-There are privacy implications inherent in the public disclosure of the information in an Application, particularly by a Natural Applicant.