From 8f465c538b3c62cd7f1aaae7bf7e61c3cf7b4736 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Peter Saint-Andre <stpeter@jabber.org>
Date: Tue, 8 Dec 2009 00:02:10 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] corrected notification examples

git-svn-id: file:///home/ksmith/gitmigration/svn/xmpp/trunk@3708 4b5297f7-1745-476d-ba37-a9c6900126ab
---
 xep-0060.xml | 14 +++++++-------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/xep-0060.xml b/xep-0060.xml
index f661a275..b82b8173 100644
--- a/xep-0060.xml
+++ b/xep-0060.xml
@@ -4022,7 +4022,7 @@ And by opposing end them?
   </x>
 </message>
     ]]></example>
-    <p>The service then SHOULD send notification to the approved subscriber (see the <link url='#impl-subchange'>Notification of Subscription State Changes</link> section of this document).</p>
+    <p>The service then SHOULD notify the approved subscriber (see the <link url='#impl-subchange'>Notification of Subscription State Changes</link> section of this document).</p>
     <example caption='Subscription approval notification'><![CDATA[
 <message
     from='pubsub.shakespeare.lit'
@@ -4052,15 +4052,15 @@ And by opposing end them?
   </x>
 </message>
     ]]></example>
-    <p>The service then SHOULD send notification to the denied subscriber (see the <link url='#impl-subchange'>Notification of Subscription State Changes</link> section of this document).</p>
+    <p>The service then SHOULD notify the denied subscriber (see the <link url='#impl-subchange'>Notification of Subscription State Changes</link> section of this document).</p>
     <example caption='Subscription cancellation / denial notification'><![CDATA[
 <message
     from='pubsub.shakespeare.lit'
     to='horatio@denmark.lit'
     id='unsubnotify1'>
-  <pubsub xmlns='http://jabber.org/protocol/pubsub'>
+  <event xmlns='http://jabber.org/protocol/pubsub#event'>
     <subscription node='princely_musings' jid='horatio@denmark.lit' subscription='none'/>
-  </pubsub>
+  </event>
 </message>
     ]]></example>
     <p>In order to cancel the form submission, the owner shall reply with the form's 'type' attribute set to "cancel".</p>
@@ -4397,12 +4397,12 @@ And by opposing end them?
       <p>In order to remove an entity from the subscriptions list, the owner MUST set the value of the 'subscription' attribute to "none" and the service MUST remove that entity from the subscriptions list and not return it in response to future list requests.</p>
     </section3>
     <section3 topic='Notifying Subscribers' anchor='owner-subscriptions-notifysub'>
-      <p>An implementation SHOULD send notification to an entity whose subscription has changed (see the <link url='#impl-subchange'>Notification of Subscription State Changes</link> section of this document).</p>
+      <p>An implementation SHOULD notify an entity whose subscription has changed (see the <link url='#impl-subchange'>Notification of Subscription State Changes</link> section of this document).</p>
       <example caption='Service sends notification of subscription change'><![CDATA[
 <message from='pubsub.shakespeare.lit' to='polonius@denmark.lit'>
-  <pubsub xmlns='http://jabber.org/protocol/pubsub'>
+  <event xmlns='http://jabber.org/protocol/pubsub#event'>
     <subscription node='princely_musings' jid='polonius@denmark.lit' subscription='none'/>
-  </pubsub>
+  </event>
 </message>
       ]]></example>
     </section3>