XEP-0369: Fix wording

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<p>MIX is specified as a family of XEPs that address the full set of requirements. Only two of these XEPs are mandatory for providing a MIX service. The others provide additional services and are used when these additional services are required. Each of these specifications has a short name, which is used to refer the specific XEP. The term MIX is used to refer to the family of XEPs. MIX is extensible, and it is anticipated that further XEPs will be added to this family. The XEPs are: </p>
<ol>
<li>MIX-CORE. &xep0369;. This specification, which is the central mandatory MIX specification. This sets out requirements addressed by MIX and general MIX concepts and framework. It defines joining channels and associated participant management. It defines discovery and sharing of MIX channels and information about them. It defines use of MIX to share messages with channel participants. </li>
<li>MIX-CORE. &xep0369;. This specification is the central mandatory MIX specification. It sets out requirements addressed by MIX and general MIX concepts and framework. It defines joining channels and associated participant management. It defines discovery and sharing of MIX channels and information about them. It defines use of MIX to share messages with channel participants. </li>
<li>MIX-PRESENCE. &xep0403;. This optional specification adds the ability for MIX online clients to share presence, so that this can be seen by other MIX clients. It also specifies relay of IQ stanzas through a channel.</li>
<li>MIX-PAM. &xep0405;. This specification defines how a server supporting MIX clients behaves, to support servers implementing MIX-CORE and MIX-PRESENCE.</li>
<li>MIX-ADMIN. &xep0406;. This specifies MIX configuration and administration of MIX.</li>
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</section2>
<section2 topic="Standard Nodes" anchor="concepts-nodes">
<p>MIX defines a number standard nodes, and this specification defines three of these nodes and the framework for adding further nodes.
<p>MIX defines a number of standard nodes, and this specification defines three of these nodes and the framework for adding further nodes.
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<table caption="MIX-CORE Nodes">
<tr><th>Name</th><th>Node</th><th>Description</th><th>Update</th><th>Distribution</th></tr>
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It may be useful for clients to read the participants list. However it is not necessary for message and presence display, as both messages and presence contain sufficient information to enable display.
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<p>
Users MAY subscribe to and read information this node, when permitted by the channel. Standard PubSub access will allow a full list of participants and associated nicks to be determined. By subscribing to the node, a user will be informed of changes to the Participants Node.
Users MAY subscribe to, and read information from this node, when permitted by the channel. Standard PubSub access will allow a full list of participants and associated nicks to be determined. By subscribing to the node, a user will be informed of changes to the Participants Node.
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<p>The participants node is MANDATORY. The Participants node is a permanent node with one item per participant.</p>
<example caption="Value of Participants Node"><![CDATA[
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</p>
<ul>
<li>'urn:xmpp:mix:core:1': This indicates support of MIX, and is returned by all MIX services.</li>
<li>'urn:xmpp:mix:core:1#searchable': This is shown in the above example and indicates that a the MIX Service MAY be searched for channels. This presence of this feature can be used by a client to guide the user to search for channels in a MIX service.</li>
<li>'urn:xmpp:mix:core:1#create-channel': This is described in <link url='#usecase-admin-check-create'> Checking for Permission to Create a Channel</link> in support of channel administration. When an end user client needs to create channels, perhaps for short term usage, this feature helps the client to identify an MIX service to use. It enables a configuration where permanent (searchable) channels are placed in one MIX service and clients will be able to create channels in another MIX service which is not searchable.</li>
<li>'urn:xmpp:mix:core:1#searchable': This is shown in the above example and indicates that a the MIX Service MAY be searched for channels. The presence of this feature can be used by a client to guide the user to search for channels in a MIX service.</li>
<li>'urn:xmpp:mix:core:1#create-channel': This is described in <link url='#usecase-admin-check-create'> Checking for Permission to Create a Channel</link> in support of channel administration. When an end user client needs to create channels, perhaps for short term usage, this feature helps the client to identify a MIX service to use. It enables a configuration where permanent (searchable) channels are placed in one MIX service and clients will be able to create channels in another MIX service which is not searchable.</li>
</ul>
<p>A MIX service MUST NOT advertise support for &xep0313;, as MAM is supported by the channels and not by the service. A MIX service MUST NOT advertise support for generic &xep0060;, as although MIX makes use of PubSub it is not a generic PubSub service.</p>
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</p>
<p>
A user MAY subsequently modify subscription to nodes in a channel by sending a subscription modification request encoded as a &lt;update-subscription/&gt; child element of &lt;iq/&gt; element. The &lt;update-subscription/&gt; element is qualified by the 'urn:xmpp:mix:core:1' namespace. The requested notes are encoded as &lt;subscribe/&gt; child elements of the &lt;update-subscription/&gt; element with the node name encoded as a 'node' attribute. This modification goes directly from client to MIX channel, as this change does not impact the roster and so does not need any local action. The following example shows subscription modification.
A user MAY subsequently modify subscription to nodes in a channel by sending a subscription modification request encoded as a &lt;update-subscription/&gt; child element of &lt;iq/&gt; element. The &lt;update-subscription/&gt; element is qualified by the 'urn:xmpp:mix:core:1' namespace. The requested nodes are encoded as &lt;subscribe/&gt; child elements of the &lt;update-subscription/&gt; element with the node name encoded as a 'node' attribute. This modification goes directly from client to the MIX channel, as this change does not impact the roster and so does not need any local action. The following example shows subscription modification.
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<example caption="User Modifies Subscription Request"><![CDATA[
<iq type='set'