diff --git a/xep-0369.xml b/xep-0369.xml
index b26f065e..0a1e456d 100644
--- a/xep-0369.xml
+++ b/xep-0369.xml
@@ -788,7 +788,7 @@
   </join>
 </iq>
 ]]></example>
-      <p>The channel responds with an IQ-result. This stanza includes the nodes to which the user has been successfully subscribed, as well as the bare JID that will be used for the user in this channel and added to the participant list.  The JID returned in the join is the user's full proxy JID.  The following example shows the result of the above request when the request is completed in full. </p>
+      <p>The channel responds with an IQ-result. This stanza includes the nodes to which the user has been successfully subscribed, as well as the bare JID that will be used for the user in this channel and added to the participant list.  The JID returned in the join is the user's bare proxy JID.  The following example shows the result of the above request when the request is completed in full. </p>
       <example caption="Channel Processes Join Request in Full"><![CDATA[
 <iq type='result'
     from='coven@mix.shakespeare.example'