ProtoXEP IoT Discovery: Removed any hard-coded account names.

inbox/iot-discovery.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,8 @@
 <?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?>
+<!-- TODO: Sub-namespace for Registration Clients.
+        urn:xmpp:iot:discovery:regunit	- Registration Units (can claim ownership)
+-->
+<!-- TODO: TBD items -->
 <!DOCTYPE xep SYSTEM 'xep.dtd' [
   <!ENTITY % ents SYSTEM 'xep.ent'>
 %ents;
@@ -42,10 +46,18 @@
 			<jid>TBD</jid>
 			<uri>http://www-rnks.informatik.tu-cottbus.de/~rklauck</uri>
 		</author>
+		<revision>
+			<version>0.0.2</version>
+			<date>2014-04-07</date>
+			<initials>pw</initials>
+			<remark>
+				<p>Removed any hard-coded account names.</p>
+			</remark>
+		</revision>
 		<revision>
 			<version>0.0.1</version>
 			<date>2014-03-11</date>
-			<initials>pw</initials>
+			<initials>pw,rk</initials>
 			<remark>
 				<p>First draft.</p>
 			</remark>
@@ -543,9 +555,6 @@
 					XMPP Server itself. This can be found out by sending a discovery request to the server,
 					as described in <link url='#support'>Determining Support</link>.
 				</li>
-				<li>
-					The account 'discovery' on the same domain. (For example: discovery@jabber.org)
-				</li>
 				<li>
 					Search for accounts on the XMPP server with nick-name "discovery". Search is performed using &xep0055;
 				</li>
@@ -969,9 +978,6 @@
 					The Owner itself can be a Provisioning Server. This can be found out by sending a discovery request to the Thing Registry,
 					as described in <link url='#support'>Determining Support</link>.
 				</li>
-				<li>
-					The account 'provisioning' on the same domain. (For example: provisioning@jabber.org)
-				</li>
 				<li>
 					Search for accounts on the XMPP server with nick-name "provisioning". Search is performed using &xep0055;
 				</li>
@@ -1219,7 +1225,7 @@
           <numRange name='V' min='1' minIncluded='true' max='2' maxIncluded='false'/>
           <numRange name='LON' min='-72' minIncluded='true' max='-70' maxIncluded='true'/>
           <numRange name='LAT' min='-34' minIncluded='true' max='-33' maxIncluded='true'/>
-      </update>
+      </search>
    </iq>]]>
 			</example>
 			<p>
@@ -1610,9 +1616,9 @@
 		<section2 topic='Hijacking predefined JIDs'>
 			<p>
 				If using predefined user names when searching for a Thing Registry or Provisioning Server, care must be taken to which XMPP Server things connect.
-				It might be possible for third parties to register these predefined account names (for example discovery@jabber.org or provisioning@jabber.org), and
+				It might be possible for third parties to register these predefined account names, and pretend to be a Thing Registry or Provisioning Server and in this way hijack 
-				pretend to be a Thing Registry or Provisioning Server and in this way hijack unsuspecting Things. If installing things using this method of finding
+				unsuspecting Things. If installing things using this method of finding a Thing Registry or Provisioning Server, these accounts must be registered beforehand, to make 
-				a Thing Registry or Provisioning Server, these accounts must be registered beforehand, to make sure the things cannot be hijacked.
+				sure the things cannot be hijacked.
 			</p>
 		</section2>
 		<section2 topic='Hijacking nicknames'>
@@ -1888,8 +1894,8 @@
 	</section1>
 	<section1 topic='Acknowledgements' anchor='ack'>
 		<p>
-			Thanks to Henrik Svedlund, Joachim Lindborg, Joakim Eriksson, Joakim Ramberg, Johannes Hund, Karin Forsell, Lars Åkerskog, Olof Zandrén, Steffen Larsen Teemu Väisänen and
+			Thanks to Henrik Svedlund, Ivan Vučica, Joachim Lindborg, Joakim Eriksson, Joakim Ramberg, Johannes Hund, Karin Forsell, Kevin Smith, Lars Åkerskog, Olof Zandrén, 
-			Yusuke Doi for all valuable feedback.
+			Philipp Hancke, Steffen Larsen, Teemu Väisänen and Yusuke Doi for all valuable feedback.
 		</p>
 	</section1>
-</xep>
+</xep>