From 82fdaa65108bbbd9018d4e3d3f1a08af97ff7fc3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: stpeter <stpeter@stpeter.im>
Date: Wed, 15 Jun 2011 10:15:32 -0600
Subject: [PATCH] 0.5

---
 xep-0277.xml | 16 +++++++++++-----
 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/xep-0277.xml b/xep-0277.xml
index 1be60b67..7d88240e 100644
--- a/xep-0277.xml
+++ b/xep-0277.xml
@@ -34,6 +34,12 @@
     <jid>vanaryon@jappix.com</jid>
     <uri>http://vanaryon.eu/</uri>
   </author>
+  <revision>
+    <version>0.5</version>
+    <date>2011-06-15</date>
+    <initials>vs</initials>
+    <remark><p>Changed the commenting Pubsub service from PEP to external.</p></remark>
+  </revision>
   <revision>
     <version>0.4</version>
     <date>2011-06-01</date>
@@ -321,7 +327,7 @@ xmpp:romeo@montague.lit?;node=urn%3Axmpp%3Amicroblog%3A0
                 href='xmpp:romeo@montague.lit?;node=urn%3Axmpp%3Amicroblog%3A0;item=2ze57d9c-1c46-21df-830c-002143d3d2qgf'/>
           <link rel='replies'
                 title='comments'
-                href='xmpp:romeo@montague.lit?;node=urn%3Axmpp%3Amicroblog%3A0%3Acomments%2Fdd88c9bc58886fce0049ed050df0c5f2'/>
+                href='xmpp:pubsub.montague.lit?;node=urn%3Axmpp%3Amicroblog%3A0%3Acomments%2Fdd88c9bc58886fce0049ed050df0c5f2'/>
           <id>tag:montague.lit,2008-05-08:posts-2ze57d9c-1c46-21df-830c-002143d3d2qgf</id>
           <published>2008-05-08T18:38:02Z</published>
           <updated>2008-05-08T18:38:02Z</updated>
@@ -365,7 +371,7 @@ xmpp:romeo@montague.lit?;node=urn%3Axmpp%3Amicroblog%3A0
             <link xmlns='urn:xmpp:microblog:0'
                   rel='replies'
                   title='comments_file'
-                  href='xmpp:romeo@montague.lit?;node=urn%3Axmpp%3Amicroblog%3A0%3Acomments%2Fa9fe0b44ea62c6be71fac8471696fece'/>
+                  href='xmpp:pubsub.montague.lit?;node=urn%3Axmpp%3Amicroblog%3A0%3Acomments%2Fa9fe0b44ea62c6be71fac8471696fece'/>
           </link>
           <id>tag:montague.lit,2008-05-08:posts-1af87d4i-3f09-41gt-871e-098182g4b2az</id>
           <published>2008-05-08T18:54:02Z</published>
@@ -379,11 +385,11 @@ xmpp:romeo@montague.lit?;node=urn%3Axmpp%3Amicroblog%3A0
   </section2>
   <section2 topic='Adding a comment' anchor='comment_add'>
     <p>If Juliet wants to comment Romeo's latest post, her client MUST then send a new Atom entry to the defined PubSub node.</p>
-    <p>Note: A comments node SHOULD be located at a personal eventing (PEP) node but MAY be located at a generic publish-subscribe node that is not attached to a user's IM account.</p>
+    <p>Note: A comments node SHOULD be located at a generic publish-subscribe node that is not attached to a user's IM account, but MAY be located at a personal eventing (PEP) node.</p>
     <example caption="Adding a comment to a comments node"><![CDATA[
 <iq from='juliet@capulet.lit/pc'
     id='comment1'
-    to='juliet@capulet.lit'
+    to='pubsub.capulet.lit'
     type='set'>
   <pubsub xmlns='http://jabber.org/protocol/pubsub'>
     <publish node='urn:xmpp:microblog:0:comments/dd88c9bc58886fce0049ed050df0c5f2'>
@@ -433,7 +439,7 @@ xmpp:romeo@montague.lit?;node=urn%3Axmpp%3Amicroblog%3A0
                 href='xmpp:romeo@montague.lit?;node=urn%3Axmpp%3Amicroblog%3A0;item=1zr23z8a-3g12-34fh-750b-120867gjc1sqh'/>
           <link rel='replies'
                 title='comments'
-                href='xmpp:romeo@montague.lit?;node=urn%3Axmpp%3Amicroblog%3A0%3Acomments%2F36ec6dfe61e52b1e2cdb248823520233'/>
+                href='xmpp:pubsub.montague.lit?;node=urn%3Axmpp%3Amicroblog%3A0%3Acomments%2F36ec6dfe61e52b1e2cdb248823520233'/>
           <id>tag:montague.lit,2008-05-08:posts-1zr23z8a-3g12-34fh-750b-120867gjc1sqh</id>
           <published>2008-05-08T18:43:01Z</published>
           <updated>2008-05-08T18:43:01Z</updated>