From 73b323a4c62a369c774d8c1a6c82a1ee0f2d223d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Sam Whited <sam@samwhited.com>
Date: Wed, 20 May 2020 09:35:48 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] XEP-0393: editorial changes from LC feedback

---
 xep-0393.xml | 28 +++++++++++++++++++++-------
 1 file changed, 21 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/xep-0393.xml b/xep-0393.xml
index 774bf9dd..0a3b5363 100644
--- a/xep-0393.xml
+++ b/xep-0393.xml
@@ -25,6 +25,17 @@
   <supersededby/>
   <shortname>styling</shortname>
   &sam;
+  <revision>
+    <version>0.2.2</version>
+    <date>2020-05-20</date>
+    <initials>ssw</initials>
+    <remark>
+      <p>
+        Clarify accessibility considerations section and be consistent about use
+        of the term "styling directives".
+      </p>
+    </remark>
+  </revision>
   <revision>
     <version>0.2.1</version>
     <date>2020-01-02</date>
@@ -439,22 +450,25 @@
     inside preformatted blocks without modification.
   </p>
   <p>
-    It is RECOMMENDED that formatting characters be displayed and formatted in
-    the same manner as the text they apply to.
+    It is RECOMMENDED that styling directives be displayed and formatted in the
+    same manner as the text they apply to.
     For example, the string "*emphasis*" would be rendered as
     "<strong>*emphasis*</strong>".
   </p>
 </section1>
 <section1 topic='Accessibility Considerations' anchor='access'>
   <p>
-    When displaying text with formatting, developers should take care to ensure
-    sufficient contrast exists between styled and unstyled text so that users
-    with vision deficiencies are able to distinguish between the two.
+    When displaying styling directives, developers should ensure sufficient
+    contrast so that visually impaired users are able to distinguish the styling
+    directives from the background color.
+    Care should also be taken to ensure that formatting designed to
+    differentiate styling directives from surrounding text does not make the
+    text more difficult to read for visually impaired users.
   </p>
   <p>
-    Formatted text may also be rendered poorly by screen readers.
+    Styled text may also be rendered poorly by screen readers.
     When applying formatting it may be desirable to include directives to
-    exclude formatting characters from being read.
+    exclude styling directives from being read.
   </p>
 </section1>
 <section1 topic='Security Considerations' anchor='security'>