diff --git a/xep-0458.xml b/xep-0458.xml index d57967d2..6ada2f28 100644 --- a/xep-0458.xml +++ b/xep-0458.xml @@ -51,8 +51,8 @@

You are welcome. Ensure that you are also welcoming. We want - everyone to feel welcome no matter what the colour of their skin, the country they live - in now, or the country their ancestors came from. We want to welcome people from all + everyone to feel welcome no matter what the colour of their skin, where they live, + or where their ancestors came from. We want to welcome people from all cultures, and religions, and of all sizes and shapes. We want people to be welcome no matter their sexual identity or orientation. We want you to feel welcome no matter your level of experience or ability. And we want you to help us make everyone else feel @@ -73,6 +73,7 @@

A small amount of effort in ensuring your words are professional and polite, and avoiding subjects and expressions that may offend, goes a long way. Humour is not a mitigating factor here.

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It's often useful to limit your comments to the point you wish to make if you're unsure.

Examples of what to avoid: