From 45fb8a395ad294d34a74297f76ed95b530c32c86 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Peter Saint-Andre <stpeter@jabber.org>
Date: Mon, 30 Mar 2009 19:20:25 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] slight clarification

git-svn-id: file:///home/ksmith/gitmigration/svn/xmpp/trunk@2927 4b5297f7-1745-476d-ba37-a9c6900126ab
---
 xep-0167.xml | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/xep-0167.xml b/xep-0167.xml
index ce01a676..e012edfc 100644
--- a/xep-0167.xml
+++ b/xep-0167.xml
@@ -656,7 +656,7 @@ delivery-method=inline; configuration=somebase16string;
     ]]></example>
   </section2>
   <section2 topic='Hold' anchor='info-hold'>
-    <p>The &lt;hold/&gt; payload indicates that the principal is temporarily pausing the chat (i.e., putting the other party on hold). It is RECOMMENDED for the parties to handle informational &lt;hold/&gt; messages as follows (where the holdee is the party that receives the hold message and the holder is the party that sends the hold message):</p>
+    <p>The &lt;hold/&gt; payload indicates that the principal is temporarily not listening for media from the other party. It is RECOMMENDED for the parties to handle informational &lt;hold/&gt; messages as follows (where the holdee is the party that receives the hold message and the holder is the party that sends the hold message):</p>
     <ul>
       <li>The holdee SHOULD stop sending media.</li>
       <li>The holdee MUST keep accepting media (this ensures that the holder can immediately start sending media again when switching back from hold to active, or can send hold music or other media).</li>
@@ -678,7 +678,7 @@ delivery-method=inline; configuration=somebase16string;
     ]]></example>
   </section2>
   <section2 topic='Mute' anchor='info-mute'>
-    <p>The &lt;mute/&gt; payload indicates that the principal is temporarily stopping media output but continues to accept media input. The &lt;mute/&gt; element MAY possess a 'name' attribute whose value specifies a particular session to be muted (e.g., muting the audio aspect but not the video aspect of a voice+video chat). If no 'name' attribute is included, the recipient MUST assume that all sessions are to be muted.</p>
+    <p>The &lt;mute/&gt; payload indicates that the principal is temporarily not sending media to the other party but continuing to accept media from the other part. The &lt;mute/&gt; element MAY possess a 'name' attribute whose value specifies a particular session to be muted (e.g., muting the audio aspect but not the video aspect of a voice+video chat). If no 'name' attribute is included, the recipient MUST assume that all sessions are to be muted.</p>
     <example caption="Responder sends mute message"><![CDATA[
 <iq from='juliet@capulet.lit/balcony'
     id='hg4891f5'