From 721cf22f7e54f2ecdfc8cf00a6ccbe53eb375388 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Melvin Keskin <melvo@olomono.de>
Date: Thu, 18 Nov 2021 14:07:00 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] XEP-0420: Release version 0.4.1

Clarify bare JID usage and improve sentences:

* Clarify usage of bare JIDs for affix elements
* Improve and correct sentences about affix elements
---
 xep-0420.xml | 20 ++++++++++++++++----
 1 file changed, 16 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/xep-0420.xml b/xep-0420.xml
index c612199b..10a83716 100644
--- a/xep-0420.xml
+++ b/xep-0420.xml
@@ -29,6 +29,18 @@
   <supersededby/>
   <shortname>SCE</shortname>
   &paulschaub;
+  <revision>
+    <version>0.4.1</version>
+    <date>2021-11-18</date>
+    <initials>melvo</initials>
+    <remark>
+      <p>Clarify bare JID usage and improve sentences:</p>
+      <ul>
+        <li>Clarify usage of bare JIDs for affix elements</li>
+        <li>Improve and correct sentences about affix elements</li>
+      </ul>
+    </remark>
+  </revision>
   <revision>
     <version>0.4.0</version>
     <date>2021-04-07</date>
@@ -138,14 +150,14 @@
     <tr>
       <td>&to;</td>
       <td>Recipient of the message</td>
-      <td>Prevent spoofing of the recipient. This element MUST have one attribute 'jid', whose value is the JID of the intended recipient.</td>
-      <td>Receiving clients MUST check, if the JID matches the to attribute of the enclosing stanza and otherwise alert the user/reject the message</td>
+      <td>Prevent spoofing of the recipient. This element MUST have one attribute 'jid' whose value is the bare JID of the message's recipient.</td>
+      <td>Receiving clients MUST check if the JID matches the to attribute of the enclosing stanza and otherwise alert the user/reject the message</td>
     </tr>
     <tr>
       <td>&from;</td>
       <td>Sender of the message</td>
-      <td>Prevent spoofing of the sender. This element MUST have one attribute 'jid', whose value is the JID of the sender of the message.</td>
-      <td>Receiving clients MUST check, if the value matches the from attribute of the enclosing stanza and otherwise alert the user/reject the message</td>
+      <td>Prevent spoofing of the sender. This element MUST have one attribute 'jid' whose value is the bare JID of the message's sender.</td>
+      <td>Receiving clients MUST check if the value matches the from attribute of the enclosing stanza and otherwise alert the user/reject the message</td>
     </tr>
   </table>