diff --git a/xep-0118.xml b/xep-0118.xml
index 0261a543..8f69bbf7 100644
--- a/xep-0118.xml
+++ b/xep-0118.xml
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
 <xep>
 <header>
   <title>User Tune</title>
-  <abstract>This specification defines a payload format for communicating information about music to which a user is listening, including the title, track number, collection, performer, composer, length, and user rating. The payload format is typically transported using the personal eventing profile of XMPP publish-subscribe as specified in XEP-0163.</abstract>
+  <abstract>This specification defines a payload format for communicating information about music to which a user is listening, including the title, track number, collection, performer, composer, length, and user rating. The payload format is typically transported using the personal eventing protocol, a profile of XMPP publish-subscribe specified in XEP-0163.</abstract>
   &LEGALNOTICE;
   <number>0118</number>
   <status>Draft</status>
@@ -205,14 +205,9 @@
     </items>
   </event>
 </message>
-.
-.
-.
     ]]></example>
-  </section2>
-  <section2 topic='Stop Command' anchor='protocol-stop'>
-    <p>In order to indicate that the user is no longer listening to any tunes, the user's client SHOULD send an empty &lt;tune/&gt; element, which can be considered a "stop command" for user tunes:</p>
-    <example caption='User Publishes "Stop Playing" Information'><![CDATA[
+    <p>In order to indicate that the user is no longer listening to any tunes (or has simply disabled publication), the user's client shall send an empty &lt;tune/&gt; element, which can be considered a "stop command" for user tunes:</p>
+    <example caption='User Disables Publishing'><![CDATA[
 <iq type='set'
     from='stpeter@jabber.org/14793c64-0f94-11dc-9430-000bcd821bfb'
     id='tunes345'>
@@ -237,9 +232,6 @@
     </items>
   </event>
 </message>
-.
-.
-.
     ]]></example>
   </section2>
 </section1>