diff --git a/xep-0045.xml b/xep-0045.xml
index de38c655..5b89b739 100644
--- a/xep-0045.xml
+++ b/xep-0045.xml
@@ -959,7 +959,7 @@
   <query xmlns='http://jabber.org/protocol/disco#items'/>
 </iq>
     ]]></example>
-    <p>The service SHOULD return a full list of the rooms it hosts.</p>
+    <p>The service SHOULD return a full list of the public rooms it hosts (i.e., not return any rooms that are hidden).</p>
     <example caption='Service Returns Disco Item Results'><![CDATA[
 <iq from='chat.shakespeare.lit'
     id='zb8q41f4'
@@ -5676,6 +5676,6 @@ xmpp:darkcave@chat.shakespeare.lit?invite;jid=hecate@shakespeare.lit;password=ca
   </section2>
 </section1>
 <section1 topic='Acknowledgements' anchor='ack'>
-  <p>The author would like to thank the following individuals for their many helpful comments on various drafts of this proposal: David Sutton, Peter Millard, Joe Hildebrand, Craig Kaes, Alexey Shchepin, David Waite, Jean-Louis Seguineau, Jacek Konieczny, Gaston Dombiak, and many others in the jdev@conference.jabber.org conference room and on the Standards mailing list.</p>
+  <p>The author would like to especially thank the following individuals for their many helpful comments on various drafts of this proposal: Gaston Dombiak, Joe Hildebrand, Craig Kaes, Jacek Konieczny, Peter Millard, Jean-Louis Seguineau, Alexey Shchepin, David Sutton, and David Waite. Thanks also to the members of the XSF Technical Review Team for their edits and suggestions, and to those who have provided feedback in the jdev@conference.jabber.org conference room and on the standards@xmpp.org and muc@xmpp.org mailing lists.</p>
 </section1>
 </xep>