Bump "XEP-0397: Instant Stream Resumption" to 0.1.1

xep-0397.xml

@@ -33,6 +33,12 @@
     <email>flo@geekplace.eu</email>
     <jid>flo@geekplace.eu</jid>
   </author>
+  <revision>
+    <version>0.1.1</version>
+    <date>2018-11-03</date>
+    <initials>fs</initials>
+    <remark><p>Minor fixes and clarifications</p></remark>
+  </revision>
   <revision>
     <version>0.1.0</version>
     <date>2018-01-22</date>
@@ -145,7 +151,7 @@
   <isr xmlns='https://xmpp.org/extensions/isr/0'>
     <mechanisms xmlns='urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:xmpp-sasl'>
       <mechanism>HT-SHA-256-ENDP</mechanism>
-    </mechaisms>
+    </mechanisms>
   </isr>
 </stream:features>
 ]]></example>
@@ -175,9 +181,9 @@
 </enable>
 ]]></example>
 
-  <p>Next, the &lt;enabled/&gt; Nonza (see &xep0360;) which is send as
+  <p>Next, the &lt;enabled/&gt; Nonza (see &xep0360;) which is sent as
   positive reply upon a request to enable Stream Management, MUST
-  contain an 'isr-enabled' element qualified by the 'htpps://xmpp.org/extensions/isr/0'
+  contain an 'isr-enabled' element qualified by the 'https://xmpp.org/extensions/isr/0'
   namespace containing a ISR token as value of its 'token' attribute. The
   token MUST be newly generated by a cryptographically secure random
   number generator and MUST contain at least 128 bit of entropy. The
@@ -220,7 +226,7 @@
 
   <ol>
     <li>The host provided in the optional 'location' attribute
-    qualified by the 'htpps://xmpp.org/extensions/isr/0' namespace found in the
+    qualified by the 'https://xmpp.org/extensions/isr/0' namespace found in the
     &lt;enabled/&gt; element of <cite>XEP-0198</cite> (the
     "isr:location").
     </li>
@@ -234,7 +240,7 @@
   tried by the initiating entity in this order.</p>
 
   <p>Note that the hosts announced by the 'location' attribute
-  qualified by the 'htpps://xmpp.org/extensions/isr/0' namespace MUST be connected to
+  qualified by the 'https://xmpp.org/extensions/isr/0' namespace MUST be connected to
   using TLS from the beginning, i.e. &lt;starttls/&gt; MUST NOT be
   used, instead the TLS handshake is performed right after
   establishing the connection.</p>
@@ -259,14 +265,14 @@
   <p>Now the initiating entity sends an XMPP &lt;stream&gt; open
   element followed by a &lt;authenticate/&gt; Nonza as specified in
   the &xep0388;. The initiating entity must also provide a
-  &lt;inst-resume/&gt; element qualified by the 'htpps://xmpp.org/extensions/isr/0'
+  &lt;inst-resume/&gt; element qualified by the 'https://xmpp.org/extensions/isr/0'
   namespace, which must contain a &lt;resume/&gt; element as defined
   in &xep0198;.</p>
 
-  <p>If the with-isr-token' attribute is set to 'false', then the
+  <p>The only defined attributed of the &lt;inst-resume/&gt; element is the 'with-isr-token'
+  attribute, whose value, if omitted, defaults to 'true'. If is set to 'false', then the
   SASL mechanism is performed as when traditionally authenticating
-  the XMPP session. If the value of the attribute is 'true', which is
+  the XMPP session. If the value of the attribute is 'true' then the "password" given to
-  the default value for this attribute, then the "password" given to
   the SASL mechanism is the ISR token. Note that this implies that only
   SASL mechanisms which take a password/token can be used this
   way.</p>
@@ -316,7 +322,7 @@
 
   <p>On success the server replies with a &lt;success/&gt; nonza as
   specified in the &xep0388;, which must include a
-  &lt;inst-resumed/&gt; element qualified by the 'htpps://xmpp.org/extensions/isr/0'
+  &lt;inst-resumed/&gt; element qualified by the 'https://xmpp.org/extensions/isr/0'
   namespace. This element MUST contain a <em>new</em> ISR Token found in
   the 'token' attribute. It also MUST include a &lt;resumed/&gt; as
   specified in &xep0198; containing the sequence number of the last by
@@ -353,7 +359,7 @@
     but is unable to resume the stream instantly it MUST reply with a
     &lt;success/&gt; Nonza as defined in the &xep0388; containing
     a &lt;inst-resume-failed/&gt; element qualified by the
-    'htpps://xmpp.org/extensions/isr/0' namespace. This
+    'https://xmpp.org/extensions/isr/0' namespace. This
     &lt;inst-resume-failed/&gt; MUST contain a &lt;failed/&gt;
     element as defined in &xep0198;.</p>
 
@@ -448,7 +454,7 @@
 
 <section1 topic='XMPP Registrar Considerations' anchor='registrar'>
 
-  <p>The &REGISTRAR; includes 'htpps://xmpp.org/extensions/isr/0' in its registry of protocol namespaces (see &NAMESPACES;).</p>
+  <p>The &REGISTRAR; includes 'https://xmpp.org/extensions/isr/0' in its registry of protocol namespaces (see &NAMESPACES;).</p>
 
 </section1>
 
@@ -461,7 +467,7 @@
 <section1 topic='Acknowledgements' anchor='acknowledgements'>
 
   <p>Thanks to Jonas Wielicki, Thijs Alkemade, Dave Cridland, Maxime
-  Buquet, Alexander Würstlein and Sam Whited for their feedback.</p>
+  Buquet, Alexander Würstlein, Sam Whited and Ivan Vučica for their feedback.</p>
 
 </section1>