Bump "XEP-0397: Instant Stream Resumption" to 0.1.1

xep-0397.xml

@@ -33,6 +33,12 @@
     <email>flo@geekplace.eu</email>
     <jid>flo@geekplace.eu</jid>
   </author>
+  <revision>
+    <version>0.1.1</version>
+    <date>2018-11-03</date>
+    <initials>fs</initials>
+    <remark><p>Minor fixes and clarifications</p></remark>
+  </revision>
   <revision>
     <version>0.1.0</version>
     <date>2018-01-22</date>
@@ -145,7 +151,7 @@
   <isr xmlns='https://xmpp.org/extensions/isr/0'>
     <mechanisms xmlns='urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:xmpp-sasl'>
       <mechanism>HT-SHA-256-ENDP</mechanism>
-    </mechaisms>
+    </mechanisms>
   </isr>
 </stream:features>
 ]]></example>
@@ -175,9 +181,9 @@
 </enable>
 ]]></example>
 
-  <p>Next, the &lt;enabled/&gt; Nonza (see &xep0360;) which is send as
+  <p>Next, the &lt;enabled/&gt; Nonza (see &xep0360;) which is sent as
   positive reply upon a request to enable Stream Management, MUST
-  contain an 'isr-enabled' element qualified by the 'htpps://xmpp.org/extensions/isr/0'
+  contain an 'isr-enabled' element qualified by the 'https://xmpp.org/extensions/isr/0'
   namespace containing a ISR token as value of its 'token' attribute. The
   token MUST be newly generated by a cryptographically secure random
   number generator and MUST contain at least 128 bit of entropy. The
@@ -220,7 +226,7 @@
 
   <ol>
     <li>The host provided in the optional 'location' attribute
-    qualified by the 'htpps://xmpp.org/extensions/isr/0' namespace found in the
+    qualified by the 'https://xmpp.org/extensions/isr/0' namespace found in the
     &lt;enabled/&gt; element of <cite>XEP-0198</cite> (the
     "isr:location").
     </li>
@@ -234,7 +240,7 @@
   tried by the initiating entity in this order.</p>
 
   <p>Note that the hosts announced by the 'location' attribute
-  qualified by the 'htpps://xmpp.org/extensions/isr/0' namespace MUST be connected to
+  qualified by the 'https://xmpp.org/extensions/isr/0' namespace MUST be connected to
   using TLS from the beginning, i.e. &lt;starttls/&gt; MUST NOT be
   used, instead the TLS handshake is performed right after
   establishing the connection.</p>
@@ -259,14 +265,14 @@
   <p>Now the initiating entity sends an XMPP &lt;stream&gt; open
   element followed by a &lt;authenticate/&gt; Nonza as specified in
   the &xep0388;. The initiating entity must also provide a
-  &lt;inst-resume/&gt; element qualified by the 'htpps://xmpp.org/extensions/isr/0'
+  &lt;inst-resume/&gt; element qualified by the 'https://xmpp.org/extensions/isr/0'
   namespace, which must contain a &lt;resume/&gt; element as defined
   in &xep0198;.</p>
 
-  <p>If the with-isr-token' attribute is set to 'false', then the
+  <p>The only defined attributed of the &lt;inst-resume/&gt; element is the 'with-isr-token'
+  attribute, whose value, if omitted, defaults to 'true'. If is set to 'false', then the
   SASL mechanism is performed as when traditionally authenticating
-  the XMPP session. If the value of the attribute is 'true', which is
-  the default value for this attribute, then the "password" given to
+  the XMPP session. If the value of the attribute is 'true' then the "password" given to
   the SASL mechanism is the ISR token. Note that this implies that only
   SASL mechanisms which take a password/token can be used this
   way.</p>
@@ -316,7 +322,7 @@
 
   <p>On success the server replies with a &lt;success/&gt; nonza as
   specified in the &xep0388;, which must include a
-  &lt;inst-resumed/&gt; element qualified by the 'htpps://xmpp.org/extensions/isr/0'
+  &lt;inst-resumed/&gt; element qualified by the 'https://xmpp.org/extensions/isr/0'
   namespace. This element MUST contain a <em>new</em> ISR Token found in
   the 'token' attribute. It also MUST include a &lt;resumed/&gt; as
   specified in &xep0198; containing the sequence number of the last by
@@ -353,7 +359,7 @@
     but is unable to resume the stream instantly it MUST reply with a
     &lt;success/&gt; Nonza as defined in the &xep0388; containing
     a &lt;inst-resume-failed/&gt; element qualified by the
-    'htpps://xmpp.org/extensions/isr/0' namespace. This
+    'https://xmpp.org/extensions/isr/0' namespace. This
     &lt;inst-resume-failed/&gt; MUST contain a &lt;failed/&gt;
     element as defined in &xep0198;.</p>
 
@@ -448,7 +454,7 @@
 
 <section1 topic='XMPP Registrar Considerations' anchor='registrar'>
 
-  <p>The &REGISTRAR; includes 'htpps://xmpp.org/extensions/isr/0' in its registry of protocol namespaces (see &NAMESPACES;).</p>
+  <p>The &REGISTRAR; includes 'https://xmpp.org/extensions/isr/0' in its registry of protocol namespaces (see &NAMESPACES;).</p>
 
 </section1>
 
@@ -461,7 +467,7 @@
 <section1 topic='Acknowledgements' anchor='acknowledgements'>
 
   <p>Thanks to Jonas Wielicki, Thijs Alkemade, Dave Cridland, Maxime
-  Buquet, Alexander Würstlein and Sam Whited for their feedback.</p>
+  Buquet, Alexander Würstlein, Sam Whited and Ivan Vučica for their feedback.</p>
 
 </section1>