XEP-0402: Integrate jcbrand’s English corrections.

Thanks for the suggestions!
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Emmanuel Gil Peyrot 2019-10-14 19:16:59 +02:00
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<li>Explain the expected workflow better.</li>
<li>Encourage clients to set pubsub#send_last_published_item to never and pubsub#max_items to some high value.</li>
<li>Add examples about notifications and +notify.</li>
<li>Request clients to add notify='1' on retract requests, so they do trigger notifications (see <link url='https://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0060.html#publisher-delete-success-notify'>XEP-0060 §7.2.2.1</link> for a rationale).</li>
<li>Request clients to add notify='1' on retraction requests, so they do trigger notifications (see <link url='https://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0060.html#publisher-delete-success-notify'>XEP-0060 §7.2.2.1</link> for a rationale).</li>
<li>Announce a feature when the server supports compat between old &xep0048; (version 1.0) and this specification, and another between current &xep0048; (version 1.1) and this specification.</li>
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<section1 topic='Workflow' anchor='workflow'>
<section2 topic='Registering to notifications' anchor='enable-updates'>
<p>A client interested in bookmarks SHOULD include the 'urn:xmpp:bookmarks:0+notify' feature in its &xep0115;, as per &xep0163;, so that it receives notifications for updates done by other clients of the user, and react accordingly. The actual notifications are explained in the <link url='#notifications'>Bookmark Notifications</link> section of this specification.</p>
<section2 topic='Registering to receive notifications' anchor='enable-updates'>
<p>A client interested in bookmarks SHOULD include the 'urn:xmpp:bookmarks:0+notify' feature in its &xep0115;, as per &xep0163;, so that it receives notifications for updates done by other clients of the user, and reacts accordingly. The actual notifications are explained in the <link url='#notifications'>Bookmark Notifications</link> section of this specification.</p>
<example caption='Client replies with +notify to a XEP-0030 query from its server'><![CDATA[
<iq from='juliet@capulet.lit/balcony' to='capulet.lit' type='result' id='disco1'>