editorial corrections and implementor feedback

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Peter Saint-Andre 2008-04-18 16:33:09 +00:00
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<p>A PEP service MAY support other use cases, affiliations, access models, and features, but such support is OPTIONAL.</p>
</section1>
<section1 topic='Service Discovery' anchor='disco'>
<section2 topic='Account Owner Service Discovery' anchor='disco-owner'>
<p>Naturally, before an account owner attempts to complete any PEP use cases, its client SHOULD determine whether the account owner's server supports PEP; to do so, it MUST send a &xep0030; information request to the server:</p>
<section1 topic='Determining Support' anchor='support'>
<section2 topic='Account Owner Service Discovery' anchor='support-owner'>
<p>Naturally, before an account owner attempts to complete any PEP use cases, its client SHOULD determine whether the account owner's server supports PEP; to do so, it MUST send a &xep0030; information request to its own bare JID:</p>
<example caption='Account owner queries server regarding protocol support'><![CDATA[
<iq from='juliet@capulet.lit/balcony'
to='capulet.lit'
to='juliet@capulet.lit'
id='disco1'
type='get'>
<query xmlns='http://jabber.org/protocol/disco#info'/>
</iq>
]]></example>
<p>If a server supports PEP, it MUST return an identity of "pubsub/pep" (as well as a list of the namespaces and other features it supports, including all supported <cite>XEP-0060</cite> features):</p>
<p>If the account owner's server supports PEP and the account is provisioned for PEP, the server MUST return an identity of "pubsub/pep" on behalf of the account (as well as a list of the namespaces and other features it supports, including all supported <cite>XEP-0060</cite> features):</p>
<example caption='Server communicates protocol support'><![CDATA[
<iq from='capulet.lit'
<iq from='juliet@capulet.lit'
to='juliet@capulet.lit/balcony'
id='disco1'
type='result'>
<query xmlns='http://jabber.org/protocol/disco#info'>
<identity category='server' type='im'/>
<identity category='account' type='registered'/>
<identity category='pubsub' type='pep'/>
<feature var='http://jabber.org/protocol/pubsub#access-presence'/>
<feature var='http://jabber.org/protocol/pubsub#auto-create'/>
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</iq>
]]></example>
</section2>
<section2 topic='Contact Service Discovery' anchor='disco-contact'>
<section2 topic='Contact Service Discovery' anchor='support-contact'>
<p>A contact MAY send service discovery requests to the account owner's bare JID &BAREJID;. If the contact already has a subscription to the account owner's presence, this is not necessary in order to receive notifications from the account owner via personal eventing. However, a user without a presence subscription needs to do so in order to discover if the account owner is a virtual pubsub service and to discover the account owner's eventing nodes. The relevant protocol flows are demonstrated in <cite>XEP-0060</cite>.</p>
<p>Note: When returning disco#info results, the account owner's server MUST check the access model for each of the account owner's PEP nodes and MUST return as service discovery items only those nodes to which the contact is allowed to subscribe or from which the contact is allowed to retrieve items without first subscribing.</p>
</section2>